Showing posts with label Swimming Sports writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Swimming Sports writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, March 2, 2016

Rm I's Swimming Sports Experiences...

Some Of Rm I's sentences about our experience yesterday:

Brrr, I just hopped out of the freezing cold, glistening water... Summer

Dante was shaking like a hypothermia victim...Kaden

I had butterflies flapping in my stomach before my race...Crystal

When I hopped out of the water I was shivering so much it felt like I was on a treadmill...Jonty

Freezing children huddled together like penguins on ice seeking warmth...Jayde

Noise like a thousand seagulls attacking a loaf of bread. Where was I? Looking after the Seniors!  Mrs Palmer